- communicate precise meaning related to the topic (Year ⅚)
- Use basic punctuation that is mostly correct. This includes capital letters, full stops , commas, question marks, exclamation marks, apostrophes and speech marks. (Year ⅚)
Bang! Jamieson and Sid raised their heads from the footpath and looked up with their blower
Eyes .Sid baker as loud as he could
Jamieson stood up and looked around .Then Jamieson and Sid got ready and wrote on his dox homeless and hunger .Sid gets up and sneers and licks the big mac wrappers from Jamieson left overs from last night people are walking pass to go to work.People on the way to work stop and give them money from their breakfast.
Suddenly there is tap on Jamieson shoulder and Jamieson looked up and see the cops next to him the cop say to him excuse me score this not a good place to be sitting but Jamieson side no to the cop but then Jamieson took a 2nd think about it and then move down the road and on the way down the road Jamieson so something yellow in the in the gutter he pick it up and look at it .It was a lotto ticket so Jamieson and Sid made there way down to the new world to see if they won money.
Jamieson took it up and it was a winning ticket he had won 1 million dollars.He was amazed now Jamieson and Sid can have a home .It is Jameson first home shine a little kid now he is 30 year old he has a home to himself .He got a new tv with sky about two week later a big storm hit his neighbourhood. His home was one of the 12 that got badly damaged so it go blown down. Jamieson an Sid were homeless for to more week but luckily he didn't buy to much man toys and he still had some money lift over.But he find a good little home for Jamieson and Sid.
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